And the peacock's tail is so large and cumbersome, robbing the species of flight.
My issue with your problems with Darwinian theory is that your attempted rebuttal of his theory - such as in this example quoted above - is plainly wrong.
The Peacock can fly.
Here is a link to a web page containing photographs capturing the bird in flight.
The bird with a tail, which according to you is so 'large and cumbersome, robbing the species of flight.'
Oops! Perhaps you'll spend some time on quiet reflection of this fact before editing this error if you're intending to publish a 'revised 2nd edition'.
Perhaps you could tell your readers how the shape of the continent of Australia is indefatigable proof of your God Gamete theory, too.